Please copy and paste it back to me, after you have corrected it.
Also, if you think you could make the cover letter even better, I would appreciate your help.
Dear Sir/Madam:
I have been encouraged by friends to contact you concerning possible openings for a Sales Representative. After reviewing your company brochure, I am confident that I can be an asset to your company and would appreciate your reviewing the enclosed resume that depicts my sales characteristics and skills.
Accepting challenges is the foundation of my life experiences and something I do with confidence. You will find me a totally committed individual with pride in being direct, spontaneous and communicative. I can maintain records, perform numerical calculations with accuracy and I need little direction to complete assigned tasks. These are the qualities that make an excellent Sales Representative.
From past experiences and education, I have acquired persuasive techniques that are needed to influence customers in making choices. My leadership skills are developed and have allowed me to spontaneously interact with people from all walks of life. I am a motivator and organizer and these skills have enabled me to effectively defuse problem situations with customers using tact, thus creating a long-term client base. Teamwork is another skill I have acquired and one I know is necessary for organizational cohesiveness. Over the years, I have had to establish daily operational bases for projects/programs and provide the direction to insure the progress and deadline were met.
I would appreciate the opportunity to meet and further discuss my qualifications, and any sales positions that you might have. I also look forward to hearing from you in the near future, thank you in advance for your consideration.
Yours Sincerely,
Sunny
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